Young Love Story
“He always seems to have a bone to pick when it comes to me?” thought Marie Ivy, while relishing the soft touch of breeze under a tree. She’s there for almost one hour, waiting for Jack Ramirez – her true love since childhood. She looks around and focuses her sight to a knife-carved-heart-shaped-image in the trunk of a tree. It’s written “Jack loves Marie”. She remembered that day when Jack kissed her softly and said the words “I love you” after etching the portrait. Also, on that day, she’s complete, assured of herself and happy for the love of Jack had upon her.
The clouds forming its shape into different forms, while the flock of birds flying in every direction. They’re flying to the tune of Marie’s heartbeat; a loving heart with no on else there inside – only Jack and nobody else. Even Marie couldn’t understand why the field with multicolored flowers swings to the tune of the soft breeze. “A lovely feeling and a lovely day!” murmur Marie while savoring the moment of her thought.
“Marie, you’re the only girl in my heart and I promise...that your love will serve as my inspiration and my undying love, be with me until the day we die.”
“Nobody can replace my love for you...and no one else in this world can stop loving you,” Jack pledged while embracing her and these words were whispered into her ear, feeling the rhythm of joyous warmth of her being.
She recalled that moment of happiness deep within her soul, that her love for Jack bounds no limit. She answered, “I love you too Jack...deep within my heart, you’re the only one I love...’till death do us part”, while embracing Jack tightly giving way to her unending love for him.
She looks at her wrist watch “Ten minutes past eight in the morning” she’s thinking silently feeling the restlessness inside of her heart. She compose herself and sit down comfortably reminiscing the past. Marie touches the trunk of the tree and wanders for herself, “It’s the tree who knows everything about our love and dreams. The leaves keep our secrets and the trunk witness the foundation of our true love with each other.”
Suddenly, she looks at a far distance, "It's Jack, my love..."
Yes, he comes for me... truly it's Jack Ramirez with a little angel together with his beautiful wife to say goodbye to her.
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Not all love especially at young age is lasting and can stay a life time.
ReplyDeleteRelationships at a young age is really tricky
ReplyDeleteTragic; but often times realistic. People change and experience different things as they grow older.
ReplyDeleteYoung love sweet love sometimes it will last forever and sometimes will end in a way we didn't expect
ReplyDeletesome love are meant to fade especially when it comes at a young age.
ReplyDeleteMaybe because they are very young. I think they have the right love at the wrong time.
ReplyDeleteSad love story for Marie. This only means that sometimes first love is not the last.
ReplyDeleteThis is a fascinating story. Sad but true. But sometimes, it depends on the person / couple. I know few peeps who started their relationship at a very young age but are now happily married :)
ReplyDeletePuppy love is sweet but it often isn't forever.
ReplyDeleteNice story. Although not all puppy love are well, puppy love. Sometimes it real first time. they are lucky though for knowing love early on.
ReplyDeleteYoung love can involve so much heartache. I know of only a few high school couples who've stuck together and eventually gotten married. The others... Well, they grew up and went their separate ways.
ReplyDeleteThis is a tragic but true story. Not all promises are kept and not all love stays the same. And usually, the ones left hoping and waiting are the ladies. Actually, there's always a part of me that believes in destiny and a part that don't. Because I know some love stories which proves that if you're meant for someone, you'll find your way back to that person. Then there's also the idea of... "why wait for your destiny when you can create it".
ReplyDeleteWho said walang forever? Sounds funny but when true love hits you, it will hit you hard :)
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